Chapter: Blackburn Page: 5.6



5.6

Chapter: Blackburn Page: 5.6

April 30, 2019
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May 2, 2019 At first glance I thought she was in kid's mobile pool! Great dialogue again, which wouldn't be out of place in a TV cop show.
May 2, 2019 I am glad that it feels natural and expected :)
May 6, 2019 I dig how seamlessly the narrative weaves between character and plot development.
May 6, 2019 Thanks! And welcome back-- it's been a while since I've seen you ;)
March 25, 2020 Company who doesn't care about leaving tracks...

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