Chapter: White Rock Page: Ch 1.22



Ch 1.22

Chapter: White Rock Page: Ch 1.22

February 7, 2017
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March 27, 2019 What incredible psychoanalytical skills, and it's funny I expected the woman to be more defensive about being seen through like that but it takes character to admire his skill instead.
June 23, 2019 I'm with Sven about this.

And Franklin can draw birds. I mean, real birds...
October 3, 2020 Yes. This is amazing. Makes both characters likable. I'm a big fan. Such a great way to show competence and likability. The character building in just these two pages is stellar.
October 3, 2020 Glad you're enjoying the read, Noee!

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