Chapter: White Rock Page: Ch 1.22



Ch 1.22

Chapter: White Rock Page: Ch 1.22

February 7, 2017
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svenbofe

svenbofe
March 27, 2019 What incredible psychoanalytical skills, and it's funny I expected the woman to be more defensive about being seen through like that but it takes character to admire his skill instead.
...(RockB)

...(RockB)
June 23, 2019 I'm with Sven about this.

And Franklin can draw birds. I mean, real birds...

Noee
October 3, 2020 Yes. This is amazing. Makes both characters likable. I'm a big fan. Such a great way to show competence and likability. The character building in just these two pages is stellar.
AgentFink

AgentFink
October 3, 2020 Glad you're enjoying the read, Noee!

Meran
July 9, 2021 I agree with ALL the comments above.
But... yes. There can be many problems with a Need to be Wanted... by either sex.
It's a NEED... which can lead, or even denote, an addiction.
Addictive behavior is always to be avoided.

Sadly, I've had to learn that one personally.

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